Notice the first impressions part, since I'm currently 'only' 25 hours in.
Yeah, that type of RPG. Probebly tells you quite a bit if this game is for you or not, right there, but more below the cut.
(No spoilers.)
Since I offered to do a review of Love and Tolerance, by Final_Draft, I originally planned to do a review encompassing several chapters. However, since the first chapter alone is 6k words, I'll just be going over the first chapter. Sorry if you would have preferred more. 
You better fuckin' follow me for this, Final_Draft. I slaved over making
I would’ve rathered going to the orchestra.
I agree I love orchestra music over one direction. So Aria and Sonata together as a couple? I’ll bite.
So will they Aria seems into it.
Why wouldn’t she be interested?
Never said there was anything wrong with that. So you’re thoughts on one of Chillbook’s finest pieces?
My thoughts:
I find this debate highly laughable because of the painfully common misconception, but the first time you ever saw my name and HAVEN'T heard my voice yet, and judging from my female OC, did you think I was a guy or a girl? 
A couple of my friends have been mistaken as females due to their female OCs, and I'm genuinely curious to see whether or not the same mistake was made on my part by somebody who hasn't heard my voice yet nor discovered me revealing my true gender.
This episode gives me quite a few mixed feelings in a similar way to how "Fame and Misfortune" did; just on a smaller scale. The primary issue I have is that it drags out the gags of Pinkie denying the reality that Rainbow Dash doesn't like pies--which despite being funny the first couple of times, gets repetitive fast--making it unclear who is supposed to be in the wrong here.
WARNING! UNTAGGED SPOILERS AHEAD!
This is one of those episodes which does exceptionally well in the first and third act, yet falters in the middle by a sudden and unexplained shift in characterisation. I understand the set up, with Fluttershy taking up a particular archetype for the different types of customers who visit Rarity For You. It's a theatrical act, using each outfit to form the basis of her persona's,
It's good to be back! Another year, another MLP season. Following on from the (mostly average) movie and all the world building of previous seasons, Twilight and Co. progress into being teachers of friendship, and all the trappings that come with it.
Friends, Fimfic-ians, Countrymen... lend me your ear.
Because Alex is back and finally catching up with this damn show. I know it's been a long time since you've heard from me, and I doubt more than like 3 people even care, but I figured it'd be fun to catch up with the show now that it's come to an end. I feel like I need to get some closure here. Who knows, it might even reignite that spark and get me back into the fandom (but probably not).
Well, after I saw this story in the featured box again and again I decided to finally have a look at it.
By the way: This is not an actual review but more akin to a react and — oh what a surprise — there will be spoilers for the first three chapters.
Everybody got that?!
Good.
Now...
Here. We. Go.
Titles are one of the most important parts of any work, in any medium. Titles are the first impression your story gives. When someone recommends a new book or movie to a friend, the title is the only universal part. The title requires conciseness, but must also hint at a lot of ideas and information.
Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Out in the Cold by EsperDerek
Rating: Teen
Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Progress by Andrew Joshua Talon
Rating: Everyone
Hey everyone, I figured I’d share with you all my first few days of experience with VR (virtual reality, for those unfamiliar with the acronym), and let you all know what I think, and what my recommendations are.
So. I've located and watched the first installment of Pony Life, and...
Well, it's honestly not that bad.
Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Before I get into the reviews proper, I just want to note: The way I’m doing these is not random--I’m clicking on the last page of my to-read list, and reviewing the stories on the bottom of each page...
I have training tomorrow, and if everything goes well, I should be an official employee. I'm kinda nervous, though, considering it's at a local fast food place... And service jobs aren't really the best kind of jobs.
Below are two fanfic reviews based purely on the initial impressions provided by the first chapter (or first 3k words.) For an outline of what my reviewing guidelines are, go here. Please do not request reviews!
Fun Fact: I turned off “Show Mature” in my settings and looked at my to-read shelf. I lost five pages.
Another fun fact, I’m on my seventeenth page! Whee! Progress!
Now before I get into the heart of this episode proper, I want to address something. This particular installment encountered rather short first chapters/prologues, and both have quite a few chapters that follow.
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